Sunday, October 14, 2012

Pitch Live!

Title: CORRUPTED

Genre: YA Cyberpunk

Word Count: 77,000

(Note: I recommend maximizing this video so you can read the words at the beginning...unless you have a tiny-word-reading superpower. :-P  Also, if you just see a huge blank space, give it a sec. I swear the video will appear.)

23 comments:

  1. I love the way this pitch opens & closes! Awesome job. (Plus, the premise just sounds interesting. ;)). Good luck! #26

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  2. Hi Brianna,

    What an intense video, lol. I loved the beginning, I'm not sure how you pulled that off! And the ending is great, too... I was like, what the hell? Where's that beeping coming from?!?! I wished I could have heard more, though, only because I'm a huge fan of cyberpunk, and a minute is too short for me :D Corrupted sounds really cool — good luck!

    John Krissilas, #40
    http://www.johnkrissilas.com/

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  3. Great video pitch! The beeping freaked me out at the end! I loved that it was short and not-sweet-but-creepy! It perfectly set the tone for your novel. Good luck! #41

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  4. Very cool opening and closing! I love it! You set the tone for your book wonderfully! Nice, nice job!

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  5. I'm with everyone else. The beginning and end were awesome. Great job.
    #5

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  6. Very interesting pitch. The style is super creative-the computer opener, the equipment in the room, the secret-style video. I like it, and I get a good sense of the oppressive world of the book's setting.

    But that beeping scared the hell out of me! ; )

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  7. Wow! If only I read the comments first, I wouldn't have freaked out at the beeping! :D Great job setting up the premise with the structure of the video itself!

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  8. That was great! :) I don't know how to do anything cool like that!

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  9. Love the set up of this pitch and the beeping... it scared me but it was cool. Great concept with high stakes. Good job.

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  10. You did a great job with this pitch! It startled me when it started beeping. Lol!

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  11. Good job on this- great production! I hope to see your story in print one of these days.

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  12. OMG I totally thought you gave my computer a virus! Great video!

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  13. Loved the concept. Fingers crossed for you!

    #32

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  14. I love how you tied the pitch in with the story concept. Well done!

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  15. I got scared with that beep at the end, and the immediacy and intensity of the premise is there. Good Luck with this!

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  16. That ending part was crazy! I thought it was some alert on my computer. Really awesome addition.

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  17. LOVE this!! All of it. What a creative pitch. WELCOME to the next round ;o) I believe this is the same I picked for Pitch Madness and I'm going to pick it again. 'cause I'm totally intrigued!! Congrats!!

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  18. I love cyberhackers! And I love how you incorporated that into your pitch--very creative!

    Congrats on being picked for the next round! :)

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  19. I love the beginning of that! Very cool. Congrats on being picked for the next round!! :)Good luck with it. I'm a new follower btw, it's very nice to meet you!

    #38

    P.S. Are you aware that your word-verification is on? Sometimes people with fairly new blogs don't realize, so I thought I'd mention it. If you want to turn it off, you can just Google, "How to turn off Captcha" and it will walk you through it.

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  20. LOL! I love it! Very creative and cute!

    I did use my superpower to read the small words. Congrats on the agent round! Great to meet you! :D

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  21. Woah. Loved the beginning and ending! And, of course, the middle. This sounds really interesting- cyberpunk? Yes, please :)

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  22. Thanks all for the woderful comments and feedback! You guys rock. ^_^

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